Calling for nerdy help!!!! I need a favor

scrillsscrills Posts: 6,700Registered Users
Anyone care to do me a favor. I'm working on a website for a non-profit and we are just about done. Anyone care to take a look and proof it for me? From my posts here, you know how bad I am at stuff like that, LOL.

any help would be created appreciated.

Thanks!!!!!

Nanze

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  • curlisue1curlisue1 Posts: 494Registered Users Curl Novice
    Looks nice! Only thing I noticed is on the contact page contact us and name lay over each other. But I'm also looking at it on my mobile which could be the issue. ;)
  • curlypearlcurlypearl Posts: 12,078Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    I'm reading it Scrills. Meanwhile, as you probably know, one super proofer is Claudine - hope she can pitch in.

    I'll post back with my suggestions, if any, shortly.
    2/c Coarse hair med. density.
    Highly porous. Color over grey.
    I love all the Curl Junkie products. Still experimenting with gels and curl creams. Still hoping for 2nd day hair....
    Every day is a gift :flower:
  • PerriPPerriP Posts: 6,613Registered Users Curl Neophyte
    I love the lay out and colors.

    On the ways you can help.

    Is hands on hyphenated?

    Under the help us section
    You have event hosting listed twice (but one includes more so I wasn't sure if this was intentional)

    The screen with the sideshow of kids, the photo names come up across the bottom

    On the main page the LEARN MORE button doesn't do anything (on mobile)

    The main link at the center top, usually this will take you to the home page but it doesn't. Not sure if that's by design




    ~ sent with love and good intentions ~
    Modified CG since Dec 2011
  • BeinDebBeinDeb Posts: 552Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    Under "About Nanze," "Who We Are," where it says click here (to find out about the Team), it doesn't work.
  • curlypearlcurlypearl Posts: 12,078Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    On the Home page under Accreditations it reads:


    Nanze Children's Services Inc. is a registered with the Non-Governmental Organizations Board of Malawi


    I bolded the a because it is a mistake. is a what?


    The a needs to be deleted. It should read:


    Nanze Children's Services Inc. is registered with the Non-Governmental Organizations Board of Malawi


    Under the page About Nanze the first heading is About Malawi. The 3rd sentence reads:


    It is often referred to as the warm heart of Africa on account of the warm of its people.


    Change that to warmth


    Same page ( here I am being picayune). Under The People it reads:


    The population of Malawi is approximately 17 million people.
    The word people is redundant. You can leave it but technically it isn't necessary since the heading is The People and clearly the population is people, but I am nitpicking here.


    Under Current Issues it reads:


    Life expectancy is Low. Do not capitalize the letter L. That is a mistake. Life expectancy is low


    It continues ...infant mortality is high and there high prevalence of HIV/AIDS is draining


    It should read: infant mortality is high and the high prevalence of HIV/AIDS is draining ....


    there is wrong. the is correct.


    Unfortunately, I have to stop for now but will try to send you some more suggested corrections later. I'm happy if I can help with this website - good for you for doing it!

















    2/c Coarse hair med. density.
    Highly porous. Color over grey.
    I love all the Curl Junkie products. Still experimenting with gels and curl creams. Still hoping for 2nd day hair....
    Every day is a gift :flower:
  • scrillsscrills Posts: 6,700Registered Users
    Yes, mobile too. Thanks. Changing it now
  • curlypearlcurlypearl Posts: 12,078Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    two more quickies.


    On the page about Project: Water,


    Waterborne is misspelled. It reads waterboUrne. There is no u in that word.


    At the bottom of that page under 18% and 19% the words are running into each other and it is unreadable. That needs to be fixed.


    More later if I have time. HTH. (trying to insert a smiley here - my computer is not cooperating!)
    2/c Coarse hair med. density.
    Highly porous. Color over grey.
    I love all the Curl Junkie products. Still experimenting with gels and curl creams. Still hoping for 2nd day hair....
    Every day is a gift :flower:
  • scrillsscrills Posts: 6,700Registered Users
    PerriP wrote: »
    I love the lay out and colors.

    On the ways you can help.

    Is hands on hyphenated?

    Under the help us section
    You have event hosting listed twice (but one includes more so I wasn't sure if this was intentional)

    The screen with the sideshow of kids, the photo names come up across the bottom

    On the main page the LEARN MORE button doesn't do anything (on mobile)

    The main link at the center top, usually this will take you to the home page but it doesn't. Not sure if that's by design




    ~ sent with love and good intentions ~


    Thanks. Got all of them except the photo info on the photos. That's going to take some time
  • scrillsscrills Posts: 6,700Registered Users
    BeinDeb wrote: »
    Under "About Nanze," "Who We Are," where it says click here (to find out about the Team), it doesn't work.

    Done!
  • claudine191claudine191 Posts: 8,221Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    Just got in from trying to save a wounded thrush. Are you good? Sounds like CP caught a lot of stuff.

    Oh, hell, I'll look at it anyway.
  • PerriPPerriP Posts: 6,613Registered Users Curl Neophyte
    Did you save it?

    ~ sent with love and good intentions ~
    Modified CG since Dec 2011
  • scrillsscrills Posts: 6,700Registered Users
    I think so. Did I miss something?
  • PerriPPerriP Posts: 6,613Registered Users Curl Neophyte
    scrills wrote: »
    I think so. Did I miss something?

    LOL, I meant the bird, to Ninja! :)
    Modified CG since Dec 2011
  • scrillsscrills Posts: 6,700Registered Users
    yeah, Ninja. How is the bird?


    BTW, Ninja was champ last night. She called me and we went over the site page-by-page. we still have some more to go, but wow!
  • claudine191claudine191 Posts: 8,221Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    Bird looked better, but then died sometime during the night.

    Nature is red in tooth and claw.
  • PerriPPerriP Posts: 6,613Registered Users Curl Neophyte
    sad. I'm sorry.
    Modified CG since Dec 2011
  • claudine191claudine191 Posts: 8,221Registered Users Curl Connoisseur
    Thanks. I'm mad as hell at Freddy.

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